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It was the middle of your summer holidays. Right now, you were waiting for your friend, Leon. You haven't seen him for the whole duration of your holidays, because he was busy with family matters.

But today he promised you, that he would spent the whole day with you. You were looking forward to see him again.

"[F/N]?", you heard a calm voice call out.

"Hm?", you turned around, and saw your awaited person standing there. You ran over to him and greeted him.

"What took you so long, Leon?"

"My cousin was being a pain again..."

"Did he try to claim your 'breasts' again?", you grinned. Leons cousin was always like this, and most of the time it ended with him getting scolded by Yao.

"Something like that. So what do you have planned for today?"

"Well, there's this festival today. There are rides and everything like that. How about we go there?"

"Sounds good.", he answered. Was it just you, or did he just smile?

"Then let's go!"


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"With what should we start, Leon?"

"The rollercoaster."

"E-Err... Okay.", you said. Truth was, you weren't really one for such rides, but you didn't want to say no.

"Come on.", he grabbed your hand and walked with you to the line for the rollercoaster.

"What a cute couple! They remind me of us when we were their age...", you heard an old woman say to her male companion.

You had to blush. Did you two really look like a couple...? You looked at Leon. His face seemed neutral like always, so he probably didn't even hear the old couple. You pondered more on the thought of you and Leon being together as a couple. Well, you were always jealous when other girls got too close to him. But that didn't mean that you like him like that, or did it?
Well, he was a great friend, always listening to your troubles, making even your worst days good, and the list goes on like that. Okay... maybe you did have a crush on him.

Still deep in thought, you didn't notice a certain someone calling your name.

"Like [F/N], are you with me?", he said and waved a hand infront of you.

"Ah! Sorry Leon, didn't hear you for a second..."

"I noticed that. Look, we're next."

"G-Great...", you tried to sound brave, but failed miserably.

You sat yourself next to your friend, and now began your torture. The beginning wasn't that bad, but as the ride grew faster and wilder, you clung onto Leon like your life depended on it.

You wobbled a bit as you stepped out, but Leon steadied you just in time.

"Well, that was fun. What should we do now? You choose.", he smiled at you. He seemed to have a good time.

"How about the ferris wheel?"

"I think we should wait with that. It's better in the night."

"If you say so... Then how about..."


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It was getting dark now. You and Leon rode every ride there was, minus the ferris wheel.

"It's about time...", you heard Leon mumble.

"Time for what, Leon?"

"Like, time for the ferris wheel."

"Ah, okay! Then let's go!", you said cheerfully.


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Waiting in the line didn't take that long. Leon helped you into the cabin like a gentleman. He must have learnt that from his time with Arthur.

You and Leon sat across eachother in the cabin.

"Leon, look! Isn't that your house, and look, over there is mine!", you laughed with childish glee.

"Yes, it is.", he smiled.

"The view is just amazing! You were right, it's really great at night!"

"Like I said it would."

"Thank you for showing me!"

"...Everything to see your beautiful smile...", he said silently, looking at the side.

"L-Leon?! W-What did you just say?", you were blushing madly. Your friend seemed to be surprised for a moment, but then looked at you straight.

"[F/N]... I... I like you, okay?", he confessed to you.

"!", you couldn't get a word out. Were you dreaming?

"You heard me, [F/N]. I like you, like for some time now. But if you don't want me...", he looked down.

"I-I... Leon, I-I like you too.", the words finally spilled from you. He looked at you with wide eyes, but then smiled like never before.

"Then can I do something like this?", he asked, and then leaned towards you, capturing your lips with his. As you two parted, you only answered with a smile:

"As often as you want."
A request from :iconpikachuart:!

It's my first time writing Hong Kong, and I hope I didn't do so bad...

Please tell me what you think of my story, and if you find any mistakes please tell me!

So P-chan, I hope you like it!



Hetalia --> :iconhimaruyaplz:
Story --> me
You --> :iconcutehongkongplz:
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:iconhetaliafreak1235:
Hetaliafreak1235 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
SOOOFRUKINGKAWAII!!!!!!! *continues makeing in human fangirl noises*
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dantania-dan Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That, ( takes deep breath ) WASSOFREEKINCUTEYOUHAVENOIDEAOMGITWASSOCUUUUUTTTTEEE~ĄĄĄ!!!
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:iconfrozenkirby93:
FrozenKirby93 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)
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dantania-dan Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you made it~
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:iconpikachuart:
pikachuart Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconkawaiipandaplz: I loved it!! Thank you sooo much~~~~

Since you said you wanted to practice your English.... You did just fine! It was wonderful~~~

You just had a few punctuation errors. When you have someone speak, I noticed that you would do this: "And the sheep ate grass.", said Alfie.

It should actually be: "And the sheep ate grass," said Alfie. All you need for declaritive sentences are commas. And for any other type, it's like this:

"Do sheep eat grass?" asked Mei.
"That sheep is a vicious killer! Run for your life!" yelled Alfred.

you don't need to add another comma after the quotation mark... ^^ see, so it was just that one punctuation error, which I know is quite confusing. I used to get grilled for doing that by my english teacher. OxO She was really scary...

:iconhontoplz::iconsaysplz:But yeah~~ I loved it!!!!! SOOO Much!!! THANK YOU!!!!

....>////< c'mhere~~:iconsnugplz:
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:iconfrozenkirby93:
FrozenKirby93 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist
You're welcome~! :iconfluffyhkjapanplz:

And thank you for telling me what I got wrong! I only write lab journals nowadays, and they don't really have anyone talking. [Or should I write --> "Add me!"the indigo said. XD] So I got rusty in writing stories. :iconsweatdropplz:

I will watch out for those mistakes from now on (and for Killer-Sheep that is).

And... I'm so happy that you liked it!
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pikachuart Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hehe. you're welcome.

I actually have no idea why I used sheep...... xD
Nothing else came to mind. ^^

and yes, I did, I did~~~~~!!!!! :iconsnugplz:
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:iconfrozenkirby93:
FrozenKirby93 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist
I would have been more afraid, if you had said that with penguins.:iconpenguin1plz:
My sister has tons of plush penguins, and they are everywhere in our room. XD
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