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When you read the letter, you couldn´t believe your eyes. You passed the entrance exam for one of the best schools in the country. But now you had to call your best friend Michelle. She had also taken the entrance exam, and you hoped that she also passed. If she wasn´t there you would be really lost. She moved here with her family from the Seychelles when you where in elemtary school. Everyone wanted to be her friend, but she just went to talk to you, the kid that no one really liked, because it was to quiet. At first, you were pretty shy around her, you didn´t know if you could trust her, but slowly she cracked through your barrier and you became friends. And that didn´t change until now and you hoped that it would stay that way. Ah, she finally picked up...

"Hello?"
"Hello Michelle, it´s me [F/N]. Did you also get the results of the exam?"
"Yeah I got them this morning, I passed 95%. And you? Did you pass?"
"Umm... Yeah I passed. With 89%."
"See, what did I tell you. You should stop being so nervous the whole time."
"Yeah, okay, your right. I really should stop worrying so much."
You talked with her some time now, before you hung up and waited for your parents and younger brother to come home from your brothers soccer match. You couldn´t wait to tell them the good news...

-------------------------------------------------Some time later ---------------------------------------------

"[F/N] we´re home!", your mother called.
"Hello, welcome home you three! How was the match? Did your team win, Finny?", you asked your little brother.
"Yeah we won. The other team was so bad, that we won 4:0."
"And how was your day [F/N]? You seem really happy for some reason...", your father said.
"A-ah yes. Well the results of the exam came today, and well... I passed them. I can go there to school.", you told them while smiling brightly.
"Oh [F/N], we´re so happy for you. You we´re so nervous the whole time, but you worked so hard so we knew you would make it.", your mother said while hugging you.
"So how about we go out to eat today. We have to celebrate the success of our children, don´t we?", you heard the deep voice of your father say.
"Yes!!! So where do we go?", Finn asked, excitment in his voice.
So you four decided where to go, and enjoyed a nice evening together.

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The rest of the summer holidays were rather uneventful. You and Michelle spent often time together, and prepared everything for the new school.

One day you and Michelle went with your and her mother to get your school uniforms. The uniforms for girls consisted of a red plaid skirt that went down to your knees, a white dress shirt, a black tie, a red blazer and a light brown sweater that was probably for colder days. Of what you could see from the boys uniform, it consisted of blue plaid pants, a white dress shirt, a blach tie, a blue blazer and also a sweater similar to that of the girls. As you stepped out of the dressing room both your mother and Michelles mother gushed over you two.

"Oh you two look so adorable. We have to take a photo of you two when we get home.", Michelles mother said.
"I agree. You two look stunning in that uniform.", your mother piped in.
"Th-Thank you, Mama and Mrs. Masham", you said while your face got red as a tomato.
"Thanks Mom, thanks Mrs. [L/N].", Michelle also said, also blushing a bit.

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And so the time flew by, and tomorow you would move into the dormitory.
So, yeah...
My first try to write a reader insert fanfiction and that in english to.
My english isnīt perfect, so if you find any mistakes please tell me. I hope I didnīt write to boring, and I hope you enjoy my story. :)
Iīm not sure who will be the end pairing, but leaning kinda to Italy x Reader.

Hetalia --> Hidekaz Himaruya
Story --> me
You --> Yourself

Next --> [link]
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Dreamcatcherfeather Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
I like it ^_^ you are a great writer. For some one who is writing their first fan fiction that is in English you did better then some people who have been writing in English their whole life. (When it said Finny for some reason I thought of A Separate Peace. I was like "Finny lives!")
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FrozenKirby93 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist
Thank you very much for your kind comment!
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Dreamcatcherfeather Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
You're welcome, thanks for writing in English so people which only know English can enjoy the story. ^_^
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FrozenKirby93 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist
Actually, I have a bit of an easier time writing in English. When I write something in German, it sounds kind of like a lab journal ^^
But I'm also happy that so many enjoy my stories(even if I haven't updated for so long...)
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Dreamcatcherfeather Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
Really? That's interesting. You are a great writer, and I'm very picky sometimes.
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FrozenKirby93 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist
I have to say it again, thank you very much for your kind words. Hopefully I won't dissapoint, once (whenever that will be) I write again
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Dreamcatcherfeather Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
I'm sure you won't
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Hetaliacanadia Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
wait so does that mean that Seychelles is my friend, Finland is my younger brother, and Sweden is my dad???
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FrozenKirby93 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist
I haven't seen it like that...XD
Yep, Michelle is Seychelles.
Actually I got the name Finn from the main character of Adventure Time. Your parents are just your parents...(was too lazy to think up names XD)
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Hetaliacanadia Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:)
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