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16 (who?)
The last day of school came again, and you got already your report. That afternoon you would hear the speech of principal Vargas and the speech of the representative of the seniors. Supposedly, Arthur would hold that speech. But now you had a bit of free time.

You still had some books inside your locker, so went up to it and unlocked the door. Surprisingly, on top of your books, lay a note. It said: 'Meet me at 20 o'clock at the apple tree.'

You looked all over the note for a sender, but none was written on it.

"Hey [F/N]! We should hurry to the assembly hall, or Mr. Beilschmidt will get on our case!" you heard Michelle call out.


Tucking away the note, you hurried after your friends.


The principal finished his speech like always. Now Arthur stepped up.

"Thank you, principal Vargas. We, the seniors, also want to thank all of you. We all had a fantastic time here, and we hope that your remaining years in this school will be as fulfilling as our years were. Thank you", Arthur said and then walked off the stage.


Right now you were sitting with your friends at the food bar. You were chatting with Matthew about your plans for summer vacation, when you remembered the note.
"Ah, I have to be somewhere... Sorry Matthew, but I have to go..."
"Don't worry about me. See you later."
"Yeah, until later."


"Hmm... there's still some time. I'll just sit down and wait", you said to yourself. It was like last year, as you sat here, watching the sun set. You could still hear the music playing from the school. You liked the song that played right now, so you hummed it to yourself. As the song ended, you looked around again. Nobody was in sight.

*Well, I'll just wait here a bit longer...*

You closed your eyes, listening to the music and enjoying the last rays of sun for the day.
Finally, after a long wait for all of you, I could get myself to write more. I'm sorry for all the waits you guys had, and sadly, I can't say that they will stop soon. But even so... I hope you like this chapter, even if it is short.
And if you find any mistakes, please tell me.

Hetalia --> Hidekaz Himaruya
Story --> me
You --> Yourself

First--> [link]
Previous--> [link]
Next--> Coming sometime.
Ending 2--> Coming sometime.
Ending 3--> Coming sometime.
Ending 4--> Coming sometime.
Ending 5--> Coming sometime.
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XxCandy-LoverxX Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Do you plan on writing any more. It's just that I saw the last comment, and it was last year... Sorry if this sounds mean! The story was good though Sasami Squad C (Clapping) [V11] Komari Kamikita (Clapping) [V4] 
FrozenKirby93 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist
You don't sound mean. I really want to continue that story, but I somehow don't know how to continue onward with it anymore. Once I have some ideas again, I will continue. I already thought of just skipping towards just all the endings...
What do you think of that idea?
XxCandy-LoverxX Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I think that's a great idea, since you don't necessarily want too many chapters. I think you should concentrate on writing the endings for Lovino, Gilbert, Francis and Antonio first, and then have another chapter on where the reader is going to graduate. Then Kiku, Feliciano and Ludwig (and any others I might not have mentioned)'s endings. I'm not sure about Sebastiano though, since he is younger than the reader. Well, if you're planning on writing an ending for him xD
FrozenKirby93 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist
Thank you very much for your input :)
I try my best to come up with anything, because I want to start new stories for other fandoms sometime soon, but I want to finish this first.
XxCandy-LoverxX Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
No Problem~
XxCandy-LoverxX Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
TurtleTini Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
I love this series! Amazing job! I can't wait for more! :heart: :D
FrozenKirby93 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist
Thank you for your kind words! :)
TurtleTini Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
It's nothing, you deserve it!!! D :meow:
JessThePegasus Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD I think I know who will come
FinlandHetalia-0 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
They better not stand me up. :iconangryplz:
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